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August 15, 2021 By Anne R. Allen 47 Comments

How to Start Your Novel or Memoir and 11 Clichéd Openers to Avoid

How to Start Your Novel or Memoir and 11 Clichéd Openers to Avoid

by Anne R. Allen Clichés exist for a reason. A whole lot of people like them. That means they get over-exposed. Clichés represent a natural way of thinking. So don’t feel bad if your first draft has a clichéd opener. It’s part of the process. Here’s the most important thing for a new writer to […]

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Filed Under: The Writing Life, Writing Craft Tagged With: Alarm Clock opening, Anne R. Allen, Ghostwriters in the Sky, How Not to Start a Novel, how to start a novel

April 23, 2017 By Anne R. Allen 110 Comments

How Not to Start Your Novel: 6 First Page No-Nos

How Not to Start Your Novel: 6 First Page No-Nos

Start your novel any way you want when you write your first draft, but keep your reader in mind when you edit. by Anne R. Allen There are as many ways to start your novel as there are writers, so be aware that these are not hard and fast rules. But newbies tend to fall […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: Academic Body, advice for writers, how to start a novel, Novel beginnings, Self-Editing, Shirley S. Allen

June 26, 2016 By Anne R. Allen 33 Comments

First Chapter Blues: Tips and Fixes

First Chapter Blues: Tips and Fixes

The First Chapter is the toughest! by Ruth Harris Someone waves a gun in the first sentence. In the second sentence, Jim (or is it Jill?) is walking his (or is it her?) dog in the rain. In the third paragraph, the dog gets loose, runs into the middle of a movie set where the […]

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Filed Under: The Publishing Business, Writing Craft Tagged With: Decades, first chapters, Ghostwriters in the Sky, how to start a novel, Jean Oram, K.M. Weiland, Ruth Harris, Writing tips

December 28, 2014 By Ruth Harris 32 Comments

What Did You Care About Most in 2014? Our Top Writing Stories.

  by Ruth Harris   As Anne and I looked back at the blog for the past year, a portrait emerged highlighting the themes and subjects that interested you most. We were intrigued by these clues about what was on our readers’ minds in 2014 and thought you’d be interested, too. So here are the […]

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Filed Under: E-Books and Technology for Writers, Social Media and Marketing For Writers, The Writing Life, Writing Craft Tagged With: 21st Century prose, beta readers, Chanel and Gatsby, critique groups and criticism, Guest blogging, how to start a novel, Ruth Harris, self-editing tips, The David Whiting Story, top posts of 2014

July 20, 2014 By Janice Hardy 70 Comments

How Not to Start a Novel: Four Things to Avoid on Page One

How Not to Start a Novel: Four Things to Avoid on Page One

  In these days of the “look inside” feature on retail sites like Amazon, the opener of your book is more important than ever.  Whether you’re going the query route or self-publishing, your first page is essential to the success of your book…and may be your most crucial sales tool.  Those first 250 words can […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: Fiction University, How Not to Start a Novel, How to edit your own work, how to start a novel, Janice Hardy, Planning a Novel, self-editing tips

February 24, 2013 By Anne R. Allen 46 Comments

Self-Editing 101—13 Questions to Ask Yourself about Your Opening Chapter

Self-Editing 101—13 Questions to Ask Yourself about Your Opening Chapter

By Anne R. Allen   This is usually Ruth’s week to post, but she’s busy proofing galleys of her much-anticipated new novel The Chanel Caper. And next weekend, I’ll be busy teaching THE TECH-SAVVY AUTHOR workshop. So we switched. On March 3rd, look for Ruth’s post on why we like a tough, flinty heroine. OK, […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: how to start a novel, Laurie McLean, Mary Sues, Nathan Bransford, prologues, Robinson Crusoe openings, Roxanna Britton, Self-Editing, Shirley S. Allen, Tech-Savvy Author winners

September 11, 2011 By Anne R. Allen 58 Comments

14 Do’s and Don’ts for Introducing Your Protagonist

14 Do’s and Don’ts for Introducing Your Protagonist

by Anne R. Allen   Introducing your protagonist to your reader may be the single trickiest job for a novelist. You have to let readers get to know your character in a very short time–then entice us go on a journey with this person into a brand new world. If you tell us too much, […]

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