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June 11, 2023 By Anne R. Allen 57 Comments

Eight Ways Not to Start a Novel

Eight Ways Not to Start a Novel

  by Anne R. Allen First let me say you can start a novel any way you want in order to get words on a blank page. Anything goes when you’re writing your first draft. I always say the first draft of a novel is for the writer and the final draft is for the […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: A Sampling of Sleuths, Anne R. Allen, first chapters, Kill Your Darlings, Novel openers, Sherwood Ltd.

October 2, 2022 By Anne R. Allen 35 Comments

How to Write a Great Opening Chapter: a Revised Checklist

How to Write a Great Opening Chapter: a Revised Checklist

  by Anne R. Allen Writers know the opening chapter of a book is the most important. That’s when we grab a reader who’s browsing in a bookstore or clicking on the “look inside” function for online retailers — and persuade him to reach for that wallet and buy the book. A new writer can […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: Anne R. Allen, first chapters, Food of Love, The hero's journey

March 28, 2021 By Anne R. Allen 38 Comments

How to Lose a Book Sale. The One You Almost Made

How to Lose a Book Sale. The One You Almost Made

by Ruth Harris Your title is just right for your genre. Your cover is on-target, too. Perfect image, just-so font, come-hither colors. This is a cover that will end up in the book cover wing of the Louvre. You know, that premium spot right next to the Mona Lisa. Your blurb is totally irresistible. I […]

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Filed Under: The Publishing Business, Writing Craft Tagged With: first chapters, First page, Husband Training School, Look Inside, Ruth Harris

November 3, 2019 By Anne R. Allen 51 Comments

Writing that First Chapter: 10 Do’s and Don’ts for Starting Your Novel

Writing that First Chapter: 10 Do’s and Don’ts for Starting Your Novel

by Anne R. Allen I’ve had questions from several writers recently about how to approach a first chapter. New writers hear so many rules about what they must do in the first line, first paragraph, and first chapter that they can feel paralyzed, afraid to write a word. Let’s hope that NaNoWriMo is helping some […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: first chapters, NaNoWriMo, Nathan Bransford, Novel openers, The Camilla Randall Mysteries boxed set

April 28, 2018 By Anne R. Allen 53 Comments

How to Write a Great First Sentence—with 22 Inspiring Examples

How to Write a Great First Sentence—with 22 Inspiring Examples

First sentences from classic and contemporary literature analyzed. by Ruth Harris No matter what genre you write, your first sentence is a seduction. It can be in the form of an invitation. A declaration. A tease. A promise. A jolt. A shock. You must be shameless and your first sentence must be irresistible. It must […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: Famous first lines, first chapters, First lines, Ruth Harris, The Chanel Caper, Writing tips

January 14, 2018 By Anne R. Allen 65 Comments

The One Thing That Will Kill Book Sales Dead—And 10 Ways to Avoid it.

The One Thing That Will Kill Book Sales Dead—And 10 Ways to Avoid it.

Don’t kill book sales dead with a less than enticing “look inside” sample. by Anne R. Allen I never have as much time to read as I think I will, and my trusty old Kindle is pretty loaded up. So I’m a picky book-buyer. Unfortunately, there are a lot of readers like me out here, […]

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Filed Under: E-Books and Technology for Writers, Self-Publishing, Social Media and Marketing For Writers, Writing Craft Tagged With: book editing, first chapters, Look Inside, Novel openers, The Best Revenge

January 1, 2017 By Anne R. Allen 44 Comments

First Chapters: Start Your Novel With Your Reader in Mind

First Chapters: Start Your Novel With Your Reader in Mind

First chapters are the hardest. So write them last. by Anne R. Allen Happy New Year! And many thanks to Frances Caballo, who this week named this one of the Best 15 Blogs for Indie Authors to Follow. I hope you had lots of fun over the holidays. Now it’s resolution time. Time to get […]

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Filed Under: The Publishing Business, Writing Craft Tagged With: first chapters, Ghostwriters in the Sky, Roxanna Britton, Self-Editing, Writing tips

June 26, 2016 By Anne R. Allen 33 Comments

First Chapter Blues: Tips and Fixes

First Chapter Blues: Tips and Fixes

The First Chapter is the toughest! by Ruth Harris Someone waves a gun in the first sentence. In the second sentence, Jim (or is it Jill?) is walking his (or is it her?) dog in the rain. In the third paragraph, the dog gets loose, runs into the middle of a movie set where the […]

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Filed Under: The Publishing Business, Writing Craft Tagged With: Decades, first chapters, Ghostwriters in the Sky, how to start a novel, Jean Oram, K.M. Weiland, Ruth Harris, Writing tips

January 31, 2016 By Ruth Harris 49 Comments

6 Steps to Hooking Your Reader: How to Write a Page Turning Novel

6 Steps to Hooking Your Reader: How to Write a Page Turning Novel

THE HAPPY HOOKER’S GUIDE TO THE ART AND CRAFT OF WRITING A PAGE TURNER by Ruth Harris “First you do it for love, then you do it for your friends, then you do it for money.” Ralph Ellison said it. Or was that Virginia Woolf? Depends on who you ask, but no matter where you […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: advice for writers, first chapters, Husband Training School, Ruth Harris, Writing tips

January 3, 2016 By Anne R. Allen 46 Comments

How to Start a Novel: A Checklist for Editing Your First Chapter

How to Start a Novel: A Checklist for Editing Your First Chapter

by Anne R. Allen   Happy New Year! Congratulations if you won NaNoWriMo in November. And even if you didn’t. In fact, you deserve congrats if you didn’t join in the madness at all, and you’ve been writing slowly and steadily all year. No matter how long it took you, pat yourself on the back […]

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Filed Under: The Publishing Business, Writing Craft Tagged With: Anne R. Allen, first chapters, Ghostwriters in the Sky, Self-Editing, self-editing tips, Writing novels

August 2, 2015 By Anne R. Allen 62 Comments

Your “LOOK INSIDE!” Book Preview: Will it Turn Readers Away or Close the Sale?

Your “LOOK INSIDE!” Book Preview: Will it Turn Readers Away or Close the Sale?

by Anne R. Allen   I get a lot of bargain ebook newsletters: BookBub, Fussy Librarian, Kindle News Daily, EBUK, etc. Often a book intrigues me enough that I click through to look at the book’s full details on the retail site. But I almost never buy. Sometimes the full blurb or a review will […]

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Filed Under: Self-Publishing, Writing Craft Tagged With: 21st Century writing, adverbs, Bargain Ebook Newsletters, chapter endings, first chapters, how to write dialogue, Jessica Bell, newbie advice, No Place Like Home

October 12, 2014 By Jessica Bell 80 Comments

How to Write Chapter Endings That Make Readers Want to Turn the Page

How to Write Chapter Endings That Make Readers Want to Turn the Page

by Jessica Bell   A good chapter ending is like having one mouthful of your favourite food left on your plate, but not yet feeling full, so you go for seconds … and we hope, thirds, and fourths. The key to a great chapter ending is to introduce a new conflict. It doesn’t have to […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: Catherine Ryan Hyde, chapter endings, first chapters, How to Be a Writer in the E-Age, How to edit your own work, how to write a novel, Jessica Bell

June 9, 2013 By Anne R. Allen 71 Comments

10 Things Your Opening Chapter Should Do: A Check-List for Self-Editing

10 Things Your Opening Chapter Should Do: A Check-List for Self-Editing

by Anne R. Allen Let’s face it: first chapters are hard. When you’re writing your first draft, you’re writing for yourself—getting to know your characters and their world. You should let everything spill out on the page free of your inner editor’s censorship. But when you’re revising, it’s a different story. You’ll need to cut […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: Antagonist, Big Boss Troublemaker, first chapters, Ghostwriters in the Sky, inciting incident, Kristen Lamb, Protagonist, Sherwood Ltd.

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Anne R. AllenAnne R. Allen writes funny mysteries and how-to-books for writers. She also writes poetry and short stories on occasion. She’s a contributor to Writer’s Digest and the Novel and Short Story Writer’s Market.

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