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July 9, 2023 By Anne R. Allen 24 Comments

9 Common Dialogue Problems—And How to Fix Them

9 Common Dialogue Problems—And How to Fix Them

  by Anne R. Allen Learning to write effective, believable dialogue is one of the toughest parts of learning to write narrative — whether fiction or memoir. We don’t want to simply transcribe the way people actually talk, with all the pointless “ums” and stammery filler-things we say in real life. But we also don’t […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: dialogue tags, how to write dialogue, The Camilla Randall Mysteries boxed set

January 26, 2020 By Anne R. Allen 38 Comments

He Said. She Said. 15 Keys to Writing Great Dialogue

He Said. She Said. 15 Keys to Writing Great Dialogue

by Ruth Harris One of them is lying. Or are both of them lying? You mean maybe both of them are telling the truth? Could be, couldn’t it? No matter which answer is the correct one, what people say and the words with which they say it, will immediately bring your characters—and your book—to life. […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: dialogue tags, how to write dialogue, Modern Women, reader-feeder dialogue, Ruth Harris

February 4, 2018 By Anne R. Allen 57 Comments

Do Your Characters Talk too Much? When to Use Indirect Dialogue

Do Your Characters Talk too Much? When to Use Indirect Dialogue

  …and How to Solve 9 Common Dialogue Problems. by Anne R. Allen I’ve been looking over some of my much-rejected early work and discovered my old stories have way too much dialogue. This is something I see in a lot of newbie fiction. I remember a guy who came into the bookstore where I […]

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Filed Under: Writing Craft Tagged With: As-you-know-Bob, dialogue tags, Food of Love, how to write dialogue, indirect dialogue, Kristen Lamb, reader-feeder dialogue

August 2, 2015 By Anne R. Allen 62 Comments

Your “LOOK INSIDE!” Book Preview: Will it Turn Readers Away or Close the Sale?

Your “LOOK INSIDE!” Book Preview: Will it Turn Readers Away or Close the Sale?

by Anne R. Allen   I get a lot of bargain ebook newsletters: BookBub, Fussy Librarian, Kindle News Daily, EBUK, etc. Often a book intrigues me enough that I click through to look at the book’s full details on the retail site. But I almost never buy. Sometimes the full blurb or a review will […]

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Filed Under: Self-Publishing, Writing Craft Tagged With: 21st Century writing, adverbs, Bargain Ebook Newsletters, chapter endings, first chapters, how to write dialogue, Jessica Bell, newbie advice, No Place Like Home

February 23, 2014 By Ruth Harris 44 Comments

From Pathetic to Professional: 8 Ways to Beat the First Draft Blues

From Pathetic to Professional:  8 Ways to Beat the  First Draft Blues

by Ruth Harris You’re happy, even delirious. You’ve finished your first draft! Then you read it. OMG, you think, did I write that?Yes, you did. 🙂 It stinks. It sucks. It’s so rancid it threatens to warp the time-space continuum. Think you’re alone? Here’s Hugh Howey in a blog post: “I suck at writing. Watching a rough […]

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Filed Under: The Publishing Business, The Writing Life, Writing Craft Tagged With: Character names, crutch words, how to write dialogue, Hugh Howey, know your genre, reverse outlining, Ruth Harris, Scrivener, Self-Editing, self-editing tips, sh***y first drafts, Zuri a love story

April 18, 2010 By Anne R. Allen 18 Comments

Does Your WIP Have Too Much Dialogue?

Does Your WIP Have Too Much Dialogue?

  by Anne R. Allen   I’ve been looking over some of my much-rejected early novels recently and discovered they have something in common with a lot of other unpublished fiction: way too much dialogue. They’re too LOUD. The characters need to shut up already and get on with the story. And yet, in all the […]

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Anne R. AllenAnne R. Allen writes funny mysteries and how-to-books for writers. She also writes poetry and short stories on occasion. She’s a contributor to Writer’s Digest and the Novel and Short Story Writer’s Market.

Her bestselling Camilla Randall Mystery Series features perennially down-on-her-luck former socialite Camilla Randall—who is a magnet for murder, mayhem and Mr. Wrong, but always solves the mystery in her quirky, but oh-so-polite way.

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