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Dialogue is fun in fiction, but too much can be exhausting by Anne R. Allen Yes, I’m quoting an Elvis song (actually by his songwriters Mac Davis and Billy Strange) in a writing article. But the title is a good thing to keep in mind when you’re writing fiction. I recently paid money for a […]
by Anne R. Allen Learning to write effective, believable dialogue is one of the toughest parts of learning to write narrative — whether fiction or memoir. We don’t want to simply transcribe the way people actually talk, with all the pointless “ums” and stammery filler-things we say in real life. But we also don’t […]
by Ruth Harris One of them is lying. Or are both of them lying? You mean maybe both of them are telling the truth? Could be, couldn’t it? No matter which answer is the correct one, what people say and the words with which they say it, will immediately bring your characters—and your book—to life. […]
…and How to Solve 9 Common Dialogue Problems. by Anne R. Allen I’ve been looking over some of my much-rejected early work and discovered my old stories have way too much dialogue. This is something I see in a lot of newbie fiction. I remember a guy who came into the bookstore where I […]
by Anne R. Allen I’ve been looking over some of my much-rejected early novels recently and discovered they have something in common with a lot of other unpublished fiction: way too much dialogue. They’re too LOUD. The characters need to shut up already and get on with the story. And yet, in all the […]
by Denise M. Baran-Unland Full transparency: I’m the reluctant co-founder and leader of a writers group. The group wasn’t my idea, and I fully intended to step away after launching it. Instead, the other leader stepped away to start a family – and a newish member at the time stepped up to co-lead until […]
by Anne R. Allen I was talking with a group of book-loving friends recently, several of whom work in bookstores, and they all lamented the “head-hopping” that has become common in adult bestsellers in the last few years. I agree that head-hopping seems to be everywhere these days. The last several novels I’ve read […]
by Liz Adams You know how you meet a gorgeous person and you want to ask the important questions right away but feel it’s not proper? Questions like: How many kids do you want? Are you allergic to cats? Will you promise to always be truthful except when I ask you if I look […]
Agatha Christie in 1910 By Melodie Campbell Some readers of Anne’s blog know that I taught fiction writing at college for over 30 years, going back to the early 90s. The dialogue below happened so often in class, I could phone it in. Me to adult male student: “There are no women in your book. […]
Does using the em dash mean you’re a robot? by Anne R. Allen Two weeks ago, we ran a guest post here from a South African entrepreneur named Dr. Jeremy Esekow. It was a thoughtful, balanced report on a contest his company had run with human vs. AI stories. I was not prepared for the […]
GUEST POST by Jeremy Esekow A few months ago, my company, Storywise, ran a writing competition that felt slightly reckless, but completely necessary. We pitted humans against AI storytelling. I came into this from two very personal places. First, as an author. I’ve sent out countless query letters over the years. Most were met with […]
by Anne R. Allen I recently had a strong reminder of the importance of the first impression. I’m still recovering from my December bout of pneumonia, which put me in the hospital for several days. My recovery from the hospital may take more time than my recovery from pneumonia. Why? Because everybody at the […]
by Anne R. Allen I’m home from the hospital recovering from pneumonia. But as we come to the final chapter of 2025, I thought I’d post some of my tips from earlier posts on how to end your novel or memoir. If you’re like most writers, you may have trouble getting that final chapter to […]
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